Feedback-Planning.

Focus: 29.12.13 Print, Level 2 (due to your own images being missing – you have lost marks for the quality, editing etc of these)

Strengths:   1.      Your prototypes are very promising to show that your final product will fit the conventions of form. You have clearly put a lot of effort into making these. 2.      You have completed font research but some work on size would be useful. 3.      You have taken the feedback from your pitch into account when making a prototype of the product.

Areas for improvement: 1.      Ensure all shooting material is appropriate to the task set; selecting mise-en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting. 2.      Explore a range of distances, shots and angles before deciding on your final images. 3.      Take your own images for both products and include edited versions as part of your planning. To gain a higher level, your images will need to be manipulated to persuade the audience. 4.      Ensure you integrate your text into your images on your final products.

Resulting Actions  (student response):     I will edit more photos and play around with them to make them relate to my target audience.