Teacher Feedback For Digipak Pitch-Planning.

Focus: Pitch Feedback

Strengths: 1.      A much more professional approach this time. 2.      You have linked your band’s genre to other bands well, showing how you are exploiting the ideas and themes. 3.      Great planning with practice shots. 4.      Making an additional mood board was an excellent idea to focus your planning.

Areas for improvement: 1.      Slow down – ensure you are not making the audience feel rushed. 2.      Make explicit links to your target and your audience. 3.      Comment on the ways in which you will use the conventions of form.

Resulting Actions  (student response):   If I did it again I would explain how I analysed the digipaks in more detail.