Updated Final Magazine Advert-Final Piece.

 

After my Focus Group feedback, I decided to make a few small alterations to my last final piece. I added:

• names of band members
• name of album
• release date
• what it is
• where you can buy it

I left out:

• tour dates (already written on the digipak
• price (might be off-putting)

I chose to keep the digipak on Akshay's head because I think it's funny and I want them all to be holding it in different ways.
I wrote in green because white text was not visible on a yellow background (also why 'Dougie' is written on Akshay's shirt, not the background.
I didn't make the photos bigger because then their shoulders would have been cut off even more and I didn't want that.
The advert is still eye-catching and simple so it can be easily seen and read from a long way away.