Thursday, 3 April 2014
Wednesday, 12 February 2014
Updated Final Magazine Advert-Final Piece.

After my Focus Group feedback, I decided to make a few small alterations to my last final piece. I added:
- names of band members
- name of album
- release date
- what it is
- where you can buy it
- tour dates (already written on the digipak
- price (might be off-putting)
I wrote in green because white text was not visible on a yellow background (also why 'Dougie' is written on Akshay's shirt, not the background.
I didn't make the photos bigger because then their shoulders would have been cut off even more and I didn't want that.
The advert is still eye-catching and simple so it can be easily seen and read from a long way away.
Audience Feedback for Music Video.
What we asked:
- What do you like about it?
- What could be improved?
- Would you check out the digipak based on the music video?
- Does it look like a real music video to you?
Audience Feedback for Digipak and Magazine Advert.
What I Have Learned:
- My work is not as bad as I thought it was, I have edited well
- People understand the ideas well
- People don't necessarily understand why Akshay has the digipak on his head in the advert, but it's good that they are all holding the digipak differently, it is creative and interesting
- Too much empty space is a bad thing
- The digipak is good because it is full of information and has a lot of different elements and detail
- Bright colours I used are good and go well together
- Everyone in the focus group preferred the digipak to the magazine advert
- A lot of people liked how I had shown the audience the song titles on the back of the digipak
- It was good of me to use the whole band and show the front of them on the front of the digipak and their backs on the back of the digipak
- Magazine Advert looks unfinished
- Most of them said they would buy the digipak because of my advert
- My ideas are original go well with the band, they are also creative
What I Would Do Differently:
- I need to make the photos and writing bigger on the magazine advert to fill the empty space
- Maybe also add a release date to the advert
- Although they said they didn't like/understand why Akshay has the digipak on his head in the magazine advert, I don't want to change it because you can see the digipak in the other photos and it was supposed to be funny
- Need to write the name of the digipak on the magazine advert/price/tour dates/names of band members
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